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Friday, November 4, 2011

Ice Cream Comets


If you know lots about space than I think you should know what a comet is. Well Room 13 made some comets. Not real comets,but ice cream comets.

As Miss King dumped the icy cold ice cream on my hands I shouted, Ahhh it is freezing cold. I could not take it any more, the ice cream was to cold. As it dripped through my fingers it left a sticky mess. How can this day get any worser.

If you want to know what comets are made from, here is the answer for it,it is made out of rocks which are different sizes. Oh yeah and the next is dust and ice. There you go, now you know what it is made of.

If your interested in comets here is how you can make it. The first step is obvious alright, scoop ice cream into a cone or in your hands. A simple step is next, pour sprinkles onto it so that can be the dust and lastly biscuit crumbs for the rocks, that is how to make it.

Filled with wild excitement I slurped the comet into my mouth. Mmmm delicious I said to myself. I felt different textures on my tongue.

I felt really great after I ate the ice cream, it was yummy. My tummy wanted some more but I did not want to be greedy. Delicious!!!!!!!!!!

This was one great afternoon alright. I might make some another day if I have the chance to.

4 comments:

  1. Hello Shalom! Your comet sounds delicious! I wonder what a real comet tastes like - dusty, metallic and crunchy maybe? Your description is very good - I like that you have told us about real comets in space and the real ice cream comet in your hand. Great job!

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  2. Hey Shalom your story's have changed a lot.That was very descriptive. Good sentence begging,s. I Wish I got to taste it. Nice work.

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  3. Now I know what comets are made from. Also your writing sounds yummy and delicious. That is really interesting. Did you had another one after that. I really like that story!!!

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  4. Hi Sharlom nice story you write there one day I would write like that

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